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This is amazing Terry! I loved the A-Z version. Outstanding and thank you for sharing with me.

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Thanks, Julie. I like words like "amazing" and "outstanding" 😂

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Fantastic! Write on! :)

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😂

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You have some mad writing skills Terry! (In Canada mad means very, very good just in case it's different on that side of the pond).

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Thanks Donna 😀

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I think people would have figured out this cipher, but the execution is so smoothly done as to become almost unnoticed. To confuse us more, try a "rot13" version. It's obvious enough, maybe, to fish us readers along and complex enough to challenge us.

(And, besides, rot13 is also a crude code cipher. This message translated by rot13.com: "V guvax crbcyr jbhyq unir svtherq bhg guvf pvcure, ohg gur rkrphgvba vf fb fzbbguyl qbar nf gb orpbzr nyzbfg haabgvprq. Gb pbashfr hf zber, gel n "ebg13" irefvba. Vg'f boivbhf rabhtu, znlor, gb svfu hf ernqref nybat naq pbzcyrk rabhtu gb punyyratr hf.")

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Thanks, Mark.It's nice to know you think it was done smoothly: I try to make these experiments unclunky!

Thanks for the code idea. I'm intending to Write a coded version, and hadn't heard of rot13. I will look into it. I did write a coded version (not here) but am hoping to do so in a way that doesn't look like a code! Cheers

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Terry, this piece flows absolutely beautifully, which is remarkable given the very tough constraint you placed on yourself. Bravo!

'Question' followed by 'Reason' was brilliant - the adjacency (not a word, surely?!) of those two letters was a gift!

AWESOME post.

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Jul 17, 2023Liked by Terry Freedman

Hehehe, very very clever and perfectly executed.

I love that X, perhaps the trickiest of letters, was able to be perfectly utilised in the hospital setting.

This could be my new favourite!

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😂 Thanks, Nathan! I have to admit, I was anxious about X at first, but then the solution seemed obvious thanks to the hospital scenario 😃

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Haha, I'm glad you told us up-front because I was saying to myself, Ok fine for now, but what's he going to do when he comes to Q and X and Z for goodness sake! And, the original story is still recognizable. Well done, Terry!

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Thanks, Jim. There was a dicey moment or two 😂.

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Jul 16, 2023Liked by Terry Freedman

This is so clever, Terry. I probably never would have noticed it was alphabetical if you hadn't told us. You even got J and Q and X, Y ,Z! It must have been fun - a sort of brain teaser. Thanks!

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Thanks, Sharron. Funny you should say that because originally I'd intended to not say what I'd done, to let people figure it out! It was fun in a brainteasing kind of way!

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