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Ken Preston's avatar

Drain the boiler had me laughing out loud. πŸ˜‚

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Terry Freedman's avatar

Lol. It's great, isn’t it?

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Elizabeth Beggins's avatar

Definitely want to work out how to weave cognock and blootered into my next story! Florence Gearngale -- ! πŸ˜…

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Terry Freedman's avatar

πŸ˜‚

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Rebecca Holden's avatar

Bonkers, quite bonkers. Laughed out loud multiple times - certainly worthy of the 'chortleworthy' label!

No idea to which book you're referring, but there's something of Conan Doyle about it in some of the vocab (which, also being Victorian, is to be expected) and phraseology.

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Terry Freedman's avatar

Good guess, Rebecca, thre only problem being that it’s wrong. Chortle. The novel I had in Mind was The Time Machine, by H. G. Wells. Like several other novels (eg Conrad’s Heart of Darkness), it uses a framing device in which someone relates someone else’s story, thereby giving the reader a story within a story.

Glad you found it chortlesome! Were there any bits in particular you guffawed at?

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Rebecca Holden's avatar

β€˜Draining the boiler’ and β€˜still dizzy from the cogknock’ spring to mind immediately!

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Terry Freedman's avatar

Lol. Brilliant aren't they!

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Rebecca Holden's avatar

Defo!

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Jim Cummings's avatar

You delight us with your ink craft! Very clever version, Terry. I have been intrigued by steampunk sculpture but never really knew what it was all about.

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Terry Freedman's avatar

Thanks, Jim! Haven’t seen you for ages. Hope all is ok

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Mary B's avatar

"Our eyes met in a moment of magic." Cue music πŸ˜‚. So good, Terry. I immediately thought of the opening of a Hallmark movie . . . of which the rest of the post wouldn't fit at all, which makes it funnier to me. Thanks for the evening chuckle.

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Terry Freedman's avatar

Thanks, Mary! πŸ˜ƒ

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Richard Donnelly's avatar

I like steampunk. It's hilarious, and accurate. People back then really did think that machines could do anything. Just like today

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Terry Freedman's avatar

Very true! πŸ˜‚

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Beth T (BethOfAus)'s avatar

My steampunk experience has been from an artistic perspective. I had no idea they had the equivalent of Cockney slang going on. A cool version of the story anyway. Well done.

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Daniel Appleton's avatar

Mentioning steampunk or its subgenres is almost like showing a steak of the month catalog to Pavlov's Pooch. πŸ•πŸ•β€πŸ¦ΊπŸΆ

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